Before and After Meme Take 2

So this is my entry for Rising-Artists' "Draw It Again" contest ( which can be found here if you want to enter yourself: fav.me/d95sy58 ) - I figured it was about time to try drawing this again, even if the change isn't as major as last time. 
Flipnote Hatena will probably always be my favorite program to draw in, despite the fact that you can only use two colors per piece.


 Original (blank) meme by Bampire : fav.me/d2xu044
Before Piece: fav.me/d7q2r7j
After Piece: fav.me/d96q6ed
I'll probably put all of the re-drawn pictures together and post that separately, but until then here's take one: fav.me/d7q3dk0
Edit: Take three: fav.me/d964d3g

Characters:
Top left going down: Hex, Cora, Alixe, September, Akane.
Center: Shi.
Top right going down: Jamie, Alice, Aria, R.J., Marie.


Good luck to any other participating in the contest!